From aaaf7637b91c585cc84b1e43ec8d785ad4578fbe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: davidsarah <>
Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2013 03:03:46 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] wording of intro

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 	<h1 style="color: #2f8ab5; font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif">Welcome to&nbsp<i>The</i> Least-Authority File System</h1>
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-			<p>Tahoe-LAFS is a Free and Open cloud storage system. It distributes your data across multiple servers. Even if some of the servers fail or are taken over by an attacker, the entire filesystem continues to function correctly, including preservation of your privacy and security.</p>
+			<p>Tahoe-LAFS is a Free and Open cloud storage system. It distributes your data across multiple servers. Even if some of the servers fail or are taken over by an attacker, the entire filesystem continues to function correctly, preserving your privacy and security.</p>
 <p><a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/browser/docs/about.rst">A one-page summary</a> explains the unique properties of this system.</p>
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