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 	<h1 style="color: #2f8ab5; font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif">Welcome to Tahoe-LAFS</h1>
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-				Tahoe-LAFS is a Free Software/Open Source decentralized data store. The filesystem is encrypted and spread over multiple servers in such a way that it remains available even when some of the servers are unavailable, malfunctioning, or malicious.</p>
+			<p>Tahoe-LAFS is a Free Software/Open Source decentralized data store. It distributed your filesystem across multiple servers, and even if some of the servers fail or are taken over by an attacker, the entire filesystem continues to work correctly, and preserves your privacy and security.</p>
 <p><a href="<http://allmydata.org/source/tahoe-lafs/trunk/docs/about.html>"><img width="512px" height="343px" alt="Tahoe-LAFS network topology schema, live from [TestGrid](TestGrid) !" src="(@@http://testgrid.allmydata.org:3567/file/URI%3ACHK%3A6opfg3uvhrvixw7c5u7kye3bjq%3Aeiqvmup7yog2rlwa2acoom2jrmgciuwr5bw5vkemxuqyg2jfbsqq%3A3%3A10%3A50638/@@named=/network-and-reliance-topology-thumb512.png@@)" style="max-width: 90%; height: auto;"></a></p>
 <p><a href="<http://allmydata.org/source/tahoe-lafs/trunk/docs/about.html>">The one-page summary</a> explains the unique properties of this system.</p>
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