From 2d60bc89e816fb1d4a84df0d992911fc7adb03b0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: zooko <>
Date: Tue, 4 Sep 2012 17:43:28 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] edit texts to be more active-voice

[Imported from Trac: page WikiStart, version 505]
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  <h1 style="color: #2f8ab5; font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif">Get Involved</h1>
   <ul>
-    <li><a href="/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tahoe-dev">The tahoe-dev mailing list</a> is the community forum.</li>
-    <li><a href="/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tahoe-announce">The tahoe-announce mailing list</a> is a low-volume mailing list for announcements. Every few months we announce a new release. If we find a security flaw which threatens your data we'll announce that here, too.</li>
-    <li><a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/wiki/Dev">The Dev page</a> has everything you need to know to start hacking on the internals of Tahoe-LAFS.</li>
+    <li>Join our community forum: <a href="/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tahoe-dev">the tahoe-dev mailing list</a>.</li>
+    <li>Every few months we announce a new release on <a href="/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/tahoe-announce">the tahoe-announce mailing list</a>. If we find a security flaw which threatens your data we'll announce that here, too.</li>
+    <li>Here's everything you need to know to <a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/wiki/Dev">start hacking</a> on the internals of Tahoe-LAFS.</li>
   </ul>
 
  <h1 style="color: #2f8ab5; font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif; margin-top: 10px">Read Some Nice Docs</h1>
   <ul>
-    <li><a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/wiki/Doc">The Doc page</a></li>
+    <li><a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/wiki/Doc">index of docs</a></li>
     <li><a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/wiki/FAQ">Frequently Asked Questions</a></li>
   </ul>
 <p><a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/browser/trunk/docs/about.rst"><img alt="Tahoe-LAFS network topology" src="/~zooko/LAFS.svg" style="max-width: 90%; height: auto;"></a></p>