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 # Security Considerations
 
-This page exists so that there is one page to read to learn about the security guarantees that Tahoe is designed to provide, as well as about any current known issues that might have security consequences.
+This page exists so that there is a single place to go to learn about the general security properties of Tahoe, as well as about any current known issues that might have security consequences.
 
 # Current Known Security Issues in Tahoe
 
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 **The following is not complete.**
 
-However, you can view [a complete technical explanation]source:docs/architecture.txt@1432#L472 of which this page is eventually intended to be a summary.
+However, you can view [the detailed technical explanation]source:docs/architecture.txt@1432#L472 of which this page is eventually intended to be a summary.
 
 # The Distributed Filesystem